Pages

Friday, September 16, 2011

Friday Flash: The Trap

Only two more to go after this, then I can rest. Continuation to The Dragon Dance.

The cold wind of early spring cut into the bare skin of Jark’s hands and face, but failed to reach his mind. He’d warned Nuria not to get attached to shapeshifter found half dead in the Ice Barrens, he’d warned her again. Other’s had been found and rescued from a cold death, but they had repaid by attacking the humans who came to trade, some even attacked other shapeshifters.
Once Fain found out that he was one of the shapeshifters stolen as a child he would hate all humans. Nuria was part human. Even if he didn’t harm her, he would have to be exiled. The village depended on trade with the humans who didn’t view them as monsters. It would be better for everyone if they were rid of him.
Jark’s thoughts were abruptly interrupted when another shapeshifter ran into him. He regained balance swiftly, while the person who had run into him lay on his back. Jark was about to offer his hand to the fellow when he recognized the face. Fain.
A child appeared, touched Fain’s forehead and shouted gleefully: “Tag, you’re the hunter now!”
”I’ll get you in a moment!” he shouted. Getting up, he brushed a bit of dust off himself. ”Sorry Jark, I wasn’t paying attention. Nell was about to catch me.”
“She and the other children will miss you.” No one had had the heart to tell Fain his village had been destroyed, the fool still planned on returning to his tribe. “You will guard the reds for one more summer?”
“Yes, but we’ll return. I want everyone to meet our children someday.”
“Yes, children…” Gods, children by an abomination who guarded the evil dragons. He had to get rid of him quickly. “Once home you’re going to guard the black dragons.”
“Oh yes, I’ve seen them up close when I was young. They are so beautiful, powerful and…”
“Evil.”
Fain hid his clawed hands behind his back, but he couldn’t hide the change in his light brown eyes; they had turned a deep grey. Just as Jark had hoped, he was upset. All shapeshifters who guarded dragons were proud of theirs. “Just because a few maim and kill for their delight-”
“Do you hear yourself? You’re part black dragon, aren’t you?” He pushed Fain’s long hair off the nape of his neck to reveal black scales.
A low growl emitted from Fains throat; it ceased for a moment as he spoke. “Speak another word and I will tear your throat.”
“They should be hunted down, all of them.”
White, leathery wings grew out of Fain’s back as he fell onto his hands and knees. Bits of fabric fell to the ground as his human form was replaced by something much bigger, a fool’s dragon. He charged without warning, his dragon-like head ramming into Jark. Fain missed the smile on his face; he had ran into a trap.
Claws dug into the fool’s dragon’s long neck, the sudden weight pulling him to the ground. Jark’s polar bear form was strong, but fool’s dragons were stronger. Fain stood up, the white bear hanging on; swinging his neck sideways he managed to lose the bear.
Jark landed on his side, quickly rising to his feet. Black lips curled into a mocking smile. He waited until Fain rammed into him again. This time he slapped Fain’s head with a giant paw, then pinned his head to the ground.
He whispered into the fool’s dragon’s ear: “Your mother was a spawn of evil and you’re only slightly better.”
Fain’s eye flicked towards him, the grey iris lost in a sea of white. Roaring Fain flung his head upwards, sending Jark stumbling backwards into one of the houses. He drew a deep breath, but his senses still got the better of him. Though the buildings were enchanted against fire, you still did not breathe flames in a village of wooden buildings.
A crowd had begun to gather. The children who had played earlier now peeked from amidst their parents. Ignoring them, Fain spread his white wings, rose onto his hoofed hind legs and shook his brown mane. He trumpeted a loud battle cry and lunged forwards, sharp white fangs glistening with saliva against a backdrop of red. His teeth were about to sink into the bear’s neck when he heard an angry voice shout, “Fain, stop this instant!”
Fain’s ears flicked back and forth as he considered the order. Reluctantly he let go of the insolent shapeshifter in bear form.
“Change!” Nuria’s hands were balled into fists, her eyes shone a bright scarlet. “I will not talk to you while you’re in battle-form.”
“But I will be indecent in human form.” He lay down in front of his partner, a sign of submission with most creatures.
“Just change into something else you rarfnigan!” She grabbed him by the mane and lifted his face to hers. “Now!”
Fain shrunk into the form of a white lap dog. His big brown puppy eyes were enough to douse Nuria’s anger.
“What happened?” Her anger had found a new target. Jark lifted his great white head and growled.
“He attacked me, unprovoked.”
From the midst of the crowd a pink wolf snorted. “We all know Jark’s a troublemaker.”
“He did something to make Fain go mad!” Nell shouted, stomping with each word.
“I merely said that the evil dragons should be dealt with.” Jark cast a fearful glance at the small bundle of fluff that Fain was now. “He changed into the form you saw, a fool’s dragon. Only a drake and a dragon are stronger. He was going to kill me.”
“He insulted the good blacks!” Fain barked. Nuria picked him up into her arms, stroking his back gently.
“No matter what, you never attack another shapeshifter.” A tear rolled down her dark cheek. ”The village elders will decide if your temper is a threat.”
She carried him home and picked out new clothes for him. He dressed in silence, shoulders slumped, his eyes still grey from sadness and shame.

3 comments:

  1. I think you wanted Fain to say "Just because a few maim and kill..." instead of "...main and kill..."
    This one definitely feels like we're building up to a fantasy epic with the exile's journey and everything! I hate when bullies like Jark get their way, but he obviously knows how things work in a way that as an outsider Fain couldn't. Though I feel like if Fain does get exiled I'd rather it was for killing Jark than attacking him--but that's just me not liking Jark.
    Already find myself really engaged with the story and the characters, to the point of wanting to know what else happens.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Oopsie, fixed ;)

    Yes Jark is a nasty piece of work and I love it comes across to the point of wanting him dead. I want him dead too, but I have to do what's best for the story.

    "Already find myself really engaged with the story"

    Yes! Mission accomplished =)

    ReplyDelete